Capturing Everyday Life...: J's Story Board

J's Story Board

I joined in the storyboard craze... I was really just playing around to see if I could make a decent one in case someone asked me to do one for them and I think I kind of liked the way it turned out. Let me know if you like it or what you'd change, etc... I may like it okay but I may like your suggestions better so CC away so I can learn & get better!

I have it here in color and also with the background in B&W - which do you like better?

The writing reads: "It used to be that I could look at you and see traces of the baby you once were. Now I look at you and instead catch glimpses of the man you will become."

Published: Tuesday, June 5, 2007

17 Responses to “J's Story Board”

~JustJulie~ said...: This is really nice. I think I prefer the color one, but both look good. The large photo is wonderful, and all the small ones are so filled with character. Great job!; June 5, 2007 at 11:51 PM
Michelle said...: ok, i like the black and white one. but i think i'd like the background to be a little darker. also the "stuff" on the left looks a little too far left...feels like they're being pushed over. maybe just move them a tad to the right...jmo! i really like it though--you've done a great job.; June 6, 2007 at 6:02 AM
Trisha said...: I think that I like the b&w background better...but I can't decide! Cute pictures btw...I like the one of him looking down :O); June 6, 2007 at 6:59 AM
Me said...: I love it so much. You made me tear up. They grow up much too quickly, don't they? SIGH! I really love the color one. You might try a black and white version with all b&w and see how that looks...but I honestly feel kids should be in color.; June 6, 2007 at 7:03 AM
April Ziegler said...: Love it! I prefer the b&w one... I think it makes a good contrast b/w the b&w big photo & the color smaller ones. And the quote is so perfect...; June 6, 2007 at 7:13 AM
Jen said...: I love the black and white one. This is so sweet!; June 6, 2007 at 7:21 AM
Mom2Drew said...: I'm not a storyboard maker/expert, so I'll give you my opinion from an outsider looking in. I think the BnW version really allows those little photos to stand out. On the color one, may be a tad distracting. If I were a parent, looking at this as an option to buy, I would jump at the chance because it's very creative. Did it take a lot of time to make?; June 6, 2007 at 7:47 AM
Heather said...: I really like the saying you used and I think you did a great job! I think I'm leaning towards the color bg although I do like them both:); June 6, 2007 at 7:50 AM
Dar Kaso said...: Awesome, the look fantastic, I prefer the B&W.; June 6, 2007 at 8:04 AM
bprincephoto said...: For not having much experience with storyboards, I think you did a great job. I like the color one, but the bw is a little less distracting. LOL Sorry not much help. I can't wait to see more.; June 6, 2007 at 8:27 AM
Tera Fraley said...: I like them both and actually thought of doing one after I saw yours, great job!! I like the one with the color in the background. JMO though!; June 6, 2007 at 9:38 AM
Bobbi said...: I like the color one, the quote is so beautiful. You did a great job.; June 6, 2007 at 10:23 AM
Tori said...: Hmm... I don't know which I like better. I think I'm leaning towards the b/w one, though. Very creative!; June 6, 2007 at 11:55 AM
Jan said...: I love this!! It's so true and you really captured some great shots of ds. Wonderful writing, too! Personally, I think I like the b&w-but the color is awesome, too.; June 6, 2007 at 5:44 PM
Angela said...: Very creative storyboard! I love them both, but I am leaning towards the B&W one.; June 7, 2007 at 11:34 AM
Anonymous said...: I like the color one, and I think it tells Jeremiah's story very well, not good.; June 8, 2007 at 8:13 AM
Veronica V Photography said...: I LOVE this!!! I like the b&w one best.; June 17, 2007 at 8:18 AM

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